On May 3, I received the prize for making it to the quarter-finalists in the 2010 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award contest.
A Publishers Weekly Review.
And it didn’t disappoint.
Don’t get me wrong. Part of me hoped for a miracle, that the PW reviewer would say my novel was “best seller” material and that I was the next Jodi Picoult. But the rational part of me knew that my novel still needed work. I just didn’t know exactly where.
Now I do.
I won’t bore you with the details. I’m sure you’ve seen PW reviews before.
When you click on a book at Amazon.com and scroll down, you’ll likely find an Amazon.com review and a Publisher’s Weekly review. And, believe me, the PW reviewers don’t hold back their punches. If you check the PW review for Jodi Picoult’s House Rules, for instance, you’ll get a taste of how tough they are.
Following are a few passages I plucked from the review:
- “…Picoult has a rough time in this Picoult-esque blend of medical and courtroom drama that lacks her usual storytelling finesse.”
- “The whodunit is stretched sit-com thin and handled poorly…”
- “…the wobbly plotting is a massive detriment…”
And this about a master!
Guess my review wasn’t so bad after all.
Anyway, it’s not a PW reviewer’s job to line-edit or nitpick about sentence structure, but to give an overall impression of the work. They’ll overlook a few spelling and punctuation errors, but they won’t tolerate a bad story. And the things my reviewer mentioned are ones I can–and will–fix before querying an agent.
Thank goodness I found out on time.
Some contestants didn’t react well to their reviews.
What some of the them overlook is that handling criticism is part of the process. Getting a PW review is huge. Nasty or not. It’s best to put it aside for a few days and then go back and re-read it later. I’m grateful that a PW reviewer pinpointed exactly where my novel needs work. I’m letting the information ferment for awhile and hope my subconscious will come up with some solutions.
And will I enter the contest again next year? You betcha. But with a different novel this time. This contest gave me hope and a mission during the three months I was a contender. And I learned a lot. I have a good pitch. I have two good opening chapters. And I need to get back to work.
Someday I look forward to another Publisher Weekly Review and hope it will come closer to declaring my novel a darn good read.
How good is that?
As always, thanks for stopping by.
misa ramirez says
You have the right attitude, Margaret! Congratulations on your journey so far. You are definitely going places!
Margaret Duarte says
Thank you Misa. Your generosity in helping me on my journey is greatly appreciated.
Angela Wilson says
This is awesome! You also took the review in stride. Some authors get totally insulted, but you are using it to your advantage.
You go, girl! And good luck!!!
Margaret Duarte says
Thanks for checking out my blog, Angela. Yes. I've learned through the classes at UC Davis Extension to take a review for what it is. An offer of help. If a writer can get past the initial disappointment of criticism and learn from it, she's on her way.